21Sep/11

Enclave by Ann Aguirre

When the cover of your book says it is for fans of the Hunger Games it is both a curse and a blessing. I picked this book up because of that recommendation, but I expected a little more from the book because of that too. It didn’t quite live up to my expectations, but it was still an above average read.

It’s starts out in the underground world of the Enclave, a small society made up of hunters, breeders,and builders where the oldest of them barely live to see twenty-five. The main character, Duece, is inducted as a hunter and paired with a boy named Fade. As hunters they must gather food for the group and face the Freaks who live in the tunnels around them. These zombie-like creatures feed on the people of the underground. When Duece and Fade are banished from the Enclave, they make their way to the surface and find our world is not as bad as the Enclave described it, but it’s not bucket of rose petals either.

Once I sat down with this it pulled me in and kept me interested with no trouble. It’s not as fast paced as Hunger Games and doesn’t deliver the sense of urgency, but I don’t think I would have even noticed that if it wasn’t for the line on the cover. Duece is feisty and brave and written very much like a real girl. She doesn’t depend on a boy to save her, but cares very deeply for her friends. While Fade and her do flirt around the idea of a relationship, that subplot doesn’t overwhelm the book. For that alone I would give this book four stars, because it seems like having a love story that takes over the action in the book is becoming the norm.

The dystopian future is well thought out and comes across very realistically. It’s easy to believe that it’s our world after a disaster. While it’s not very clear what has happened to leave the world this way, for the most part that is okay because the characters themselves don’t know what happened.

Overall, a good read. I just found out this is the first book in a series, and I’m not sure how I feel about that. I liked where the story ended. Either way, I would recommend this book to anyone who is enjoying the recent spat of dystopian YA!

13Sep/11

#YesGayYA

So yesterday the internet (specifically Twitter and Blogs) spun into a frenzy over this PW article: http://blogs.publishersweekly.com/blogs/genreville/?p=1519 that talked about two writers who were asked to change their gay characters to straight ones, or cut them out of the story entirely.

While being asked to cut the characters out is pretty ridiculous, I think what’s more concerning is the agents who rejected their book, but didn’t specifically say it was because of the gay characters. I think that is probably a far more widespread phenomenon. It’s easy to point fingers and cry out when someone has the balls to say that you need to change a character to make it more marketable, but how many people rejected their book without giving an honest reason why?

How many books is this happening to every day? How many form rejections of “This doesn’t seem like the right work for us at this time” really mean “Sorry, gays don’t sell”? It’s a lot harder to pin down those rejections for what they really are. No one asked me to straighten up my girls in Morning Rising but none of the agents I sent it out to (even ones who were looking for diversity and actively seeking clients) seemed to be able to look past the lesbian fact.

Now, perhaps I just wrote a pile of crap, I’m completely aware that that could be the case. That doesn’t change the fact that when rejections come in for a GayYA, you can’t help but wonder in the back of your mind if it’s the story they don’t like or the characters. That sucks for authors. It sucks that this book which I love almost more than any other one I have written because it’s exactly what I wanted to read as a teen, will never reach as many teens as I want it to.

I self-published through Amazon and Barnes & Noble because I wanted to see what the self-publishing hype was about. I chose to publish this book through them because I knew it was going to be the hardest to sell to an agent. Sad, but true.

If you are interested in supporting GayYA check out some of the books from this list http://tanuki-green.livejournal.com/329393.html or visit http://www.gayya.org/

10Sep/11

Dark

It took a while, but Bedazzled Ink has finally released their new issue featuring a short story by me and a beautiful ad for Morning Rising

“Dark” is a very quick read and can be found here: http://bedazzledink.com/khimairal-ink-magazine/current-issue/

You can read the magazine online or download it.